I got holes in my
socks
And my feet are cold
And my shoes are
worn out
Cause they are old
I guess I walk too
much
And talk too little
And I'm not 5'1 or
5'2
I'm stuck in the
middle
I'm really short,
Short as an elf
Got to climb on the
counter
To reach that shelf
I'm small,
But I'm not a toy
I'm fragile,
So don't mess with
me boy
Don't mess with my
heart
Cause it'll break
I'm not sure how
much more
It can take
I can really tell this is from the heart ;) It's written very well! I love your voice in this piece. All of your writing is really from you. The words and the voice that comes out in your pieces are just amazing! Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteMelody~
ReplyDeleteEvery piece you write makes me yern for more. I love your writing so very much. Your voice is always super powerful!
-- Really enjoyed this poem!
Melody--
ReplyDeleteLovely piece... despite the rhyme and beat of the words, this character portrays a very raw and real emotion that I can tell you put a lot of feeling into.
As you tell me that my pieces have a lot to do with mirrors and relationships, I can say that you have a relationship theme as well... ;)