It's raining.
The drops are sliding down the window like the tears down my face.
The sky is cloudy like his eyes.
I moan thunder and scream light.
My fury builds the pressure of the rain.
I tunnel and twist through the air, leaving a path of destruction behind me.
My pitiful gasps rock the sea.
I pelt others with sorrow.
Yet others enjoy my glistening sadness.
My heart freezes over.
I speak one earth-shaking word.
Why
OMG that is like the most amazing poem ever! I like all of the similes and metaphors. They're so awesome! Great job! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! :)
ReplyDeleteWow! It shouldn't work, but it does. I love how it seems scary, but then it is more sad.
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