Thursday, December 15, 2011

Mockingjay Analysis


In Mockingjay, a teenage girl is overcome with emotions of love, pain, and spite while trying to adapt to a completely different environment.  Mockingjay is written in Katniss, the teenage girl’s, point of view.  With Katniss telling the story, everything seems to be a do or die situation.
After being in the hunger games twice, Katniss sees everything as life and death.  In district 8, it was sit there and hide while people die, or try to shoot down the Capital’s hoverplanes against orders.  Again, in the Capitol, it was be a good girl and head back to camp, or try to get to President Snow’ s mansion so she can finally get her revenge.
If the story was told from one of the other characters point of view, everything would be different.  I believe Katniss was the one that was chosen to tell the story, because she had the most emotional point of view and it is easiest to get into the story when there are lots of emotions.  Just imagine what it would be like if Peeta told the story.

If


                                                  
If I hadn’t been sent to that house, I would have had a normal eleven- year-olds life, but in that house, there were no ifs allowed.  There were also no ands, buts, or whys.  A full list of rules hung on the inside of my bedroom door, just to remind me that in that house, I had no freedom and my opinion was worth as much as the scum on the side of the road.  The insane psychopaths actually thought that I was going to obey them.  Yeah, they knew nothing about me.
            Their first mistake was leaving a window wide open.   As soon as I was left alone in my room, I poked my head outside to see how high up from the ground I was.  The window was at a pretty standard height for the second floor.   Then I noticed that a part of the roof angled downward right below my window.  When I was walking in, I had noticed that a separate part of the roof covered the porch.  This was the roof that I was looking at right now.  Well, this is the shortest time that I have ever stayed in a house before, I thought.  Without a moment’s hesitation, I swung my legs over the window sill and planted my feet on the roof.  After making sure I had my balance, I scooted down to the edge of the roof, and let my feet dangle until I was only two feet from the ground.  I let go of the roof and thumped onto the ground- only to realize that Mr. and Mrs.Gumblegin had been sitting on the porch this whole time.  I could tell by their faces that they were not pleased to know that I wanted to escape from their house after only ten minutes.  “How dare you dare to run away!”  He growled.  The corners of my mouth twitched as I fought to not smile.  Normally I was able to keep a straight face, but puns always got to me. 
            “Don’t take it personally.  I’ve ran from hundreds of houses before, this isn’t the first.” 
            “Well, don’t you like it here?” Mrs. Gumblegin screeched in her nails-scratching-chalkboard voice. 
                        “Oh, of course.  Every eleven-year- old loves long lists of rules, chores, and requirements. 
            Mr. Gumblegin glowered at me until his fury broke out.  “We give you a home and you thank us with running away and insulting us.”
            “I simply said that I love living here.” I said in my best innocent baby voice.
Mr. Gumblegin slapped me across the face.  Fortunately all his neighbors were outside and saw the whole thing happen.   One of them ran over and put her arm around me protectively.  I pretended to cry and immediately more of the neighbors ran over and formed a semicircle around me that put them in between me and Mr. Gumblegin. 
“What’s your reasoning behind the abuse of this child?”  asked the woman that had come over first.
“She tried to run away.”
“Well, I think I would run away too if I had an abusive parent.”
“This is the first time I hit her!”
“You know what?  I think that if you’re just going to abuse this girl and lie about it, I don’t think she would be safe sleeping in the same house as you. You might try murder her in her sleep.  So she will be spending the night at my house.”
“I would never murder anyone, much less a child.  Also, you do not have any proof that I have abused her before this, and you cannot just take steal my child.”
“I wouldn’t be stealing her if she wanted to come over.” For the first time, she looked at me.  She wore her black hair up in a spiked Mohawk with every spike dyed a different color.  I knew nothing else about what she looked like, because I couldn’t peel my eyes from her exotic hair.  “What do you say, do you want to spend the night at my house, I’m ordering pizza.” I was utterly shocked.  Half because I still couldn’t get over her hair and half because it was the first time that I ever had a choice. 
I could barely get the words out.  “Yeah, I’d love to.” This time I wasn’t being sarcastic. 
We walked over to her house.  “By the way, I’m Sildrena.”
Her parents probably had problems deciding on one name so they must have just mushed three into one, I thought.  “I’m Ashlen.  I like your hair.” 
“Hey, I figured that if I was going to have a crazy name, I mine as well have hair to match.”  We both laughed, and a new friendship was formed.

Pictures of Hollis Woods


            As a baby, Hollis Woods was found abandoned when she was one day old.  She was then bounced around from one foster home to the next.  Eventually she found a family that she loved, but she ran away because she felt she was to blame for the family’s problems.  Then she met Josie and loved her as much as she loved the Regans, but staying with Josie became more and more difficult and Hollis and Josie ran away together.  Hollis was found at their hiding spot by a member of the Regan family and she realized that she shouldn’t have ran away from the Regans.  Josie went to live with her sister and Hollis went to live with the Regans. 
            This book is the novel version of the saying “If you love something set it free. If it comes back to you, it's yours. If it doesn't, it never was

Total Darkness

Author's note: I wrote this poem last year.       
Total darkness, there’s never any light. 
No sun in the sky, no shadows in the night.
There are no stars in the sky, at night there is no moon.
There is no warmth; the sun doesn’t come out at morning, night, or noon.
When I first found out that we were moving to total darkness, I asked why, but I never found out.
No light at all, no lamps, candles, or matches, this made me want to shout!
One day, I just got too angry, I ran away from home.
I didn’t go far, just to the end of the road where there was a house in the shape of a dome. 
I wanted to go inside and out of the cold, so I raised my fist and I knocked on the door.
They let me in, and the house was upside down, so when I walked on the ceiling, I was really on the floor!
When I asked why their house was upside down, they said they didn’t know!
I thought this was getting kind of weird so I said I had to go.
I ran out of the house and down the street.
I was running so fast that I was already at the end of the garden where we grew carrots, tomatoes, and beets.
Then, I rushed through the door, glad to be back,
Even though our home was only a shack.
I went to bed and pretended that I was never away.
I was glad to be home and I planned to stay.

Rats

Watch as the brown and mangy rats scurry  down the street
They enter your clean home ad leave it not so neat
You return and everything is gone, they took it all
Run, run , run to town hall
Plead your cause to the city
They shall take pity
Though your life will be found, your items will not
You will find no value in things that are bought
Sentimental value yes, but never worth a dollar
Money is a symbol for mans greed and a way to make others seem smaller

Friday, December 9, 2011

The Thing You Love Most

One day, I'm going to get out of this god awful town.  I'm going to make something of myself. I'll be a singer, or a dancer, or I'll write a book about myself.  As soon as I get enough money, I'm out of here. Gone for good, never coming back.  It was going to be hard to save enough money to leave, considering I was paid seven dollars an hour and no one in this town ever tipped more fifty cents. 
The end of my shift came and I walked outside to be greeted by a blizzard and six inches of snow.  Fantastic.  I even wore my tallest high-heels today.  I had walked two steps before I slipped on the ice.  I was soaked and one of my heels had broke off the shoe.  Swears streamed out of my mouth for a good two minutes.  I picked myself up off the ground and continued across the parking lot, leaving the heels behind in the snow.  That's when she came.  "What are you doing here?" I squeaked. 
"Ivadell, my dear.  Let me tell you about a deal that your sister made.   She asked for a better life in exchange for anything that I would want.  I think you know what happens when you offer a witch anything."
I nodded.  "If you offer a witch anything, they kill the thing you love the most."
"Very good.  You speak as if you yourself had made that mistake."  I had, and she knew it, but that was what witches did, they tortured their victims before they killed them.  "I gave your sister what she wanted.  Now I get to collect my payment."
The knife ripped through my flesh as I heard her say her last words.  "No matter what, there will always be a price." 

Friday, November 18, 2011

Character Analysis Essay

            When I was seven, my brother and I walked over to my neighbor’s house.  His backyard was getting remodeled, so there was a pile of rocks in the corner of his yard.  He and my brother decided that it would be fun to throw rocks at the wall.  My brother eventually got bored and chose a new target, me.  With an evil grin, he drew back his arm and chucked a rock the size of a softball at me.  It hit me square in the face and he just stood there and laughed while I ran into the house, blood gushing from the gash on my face.   Steven, a character from Pictures of Hollis Woods nothing like that.
            Steven is extremely nice, although he tries to hide it. For example, on pg. 40, Steven quickly divided his Hershey bar and gave Hollis a piece. He didn’t want Hollis to know that he gave her the bigger half, but she noticed anyway. He does lots of small acts of kindness for Hollis which leads to his love for his sister. 
Hollis has a caring brother.  His love for her is obvious on page 78 when he has to blink back tears. He knew he loved Hollis as soon as she let him win their second checkers game when Hollis was first introduced to the family.
Steven shows his sister around her new home and shows her Old Mans mountain instead of throwing rocks at her. He is the ideal brother.